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I thought my essay was presented very well but I think I definitely could have changed certain parts of my essay that would make the essay flow so much better. I think certain parts in which I compared Horatio and Hamlet were very intriguing but also not fully developed in my analysis of their interactions. I discussed Hamlet's deep thoughts and reactions to certain events and how that is intertwined in his use of diction. Also my explanation of Horatio's straightforward diction could have been analyzed in more depth, but I feel that overall my essay was very decent and there are definitely areas to improve on.